The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the past few years,
traffic
problems
is
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increasingly
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day by day. Developing countries are facing these issues enormously.
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good idea to solve
this
issue
to
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admire
people
live
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who live
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in
cities
rather than
countryside
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.
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partly true, because
traffic
problems are arising in the
cities
and
people
having
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these issues in towns.
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best
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way to live in
countryside
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rather than
cities
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the cities
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. There are numerous reasons which can benefit for
people
to live in
countryside
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.
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, avoid
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and bustle of
the
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motor vehicles and
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can lead
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this
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opportunity to live in
peace
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and quiet environment. Many times
people
have
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stuck in
traffic
jam
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and they are waiting for hours and hours in the
cities
. The reason for excessive of motor cars.
People
have their own vehicles and they could
effect
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the phantom
traffic
.
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, It is a good way to cope
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obstacle to live in urban areas. There are minimal vehicles which
people
can drive and
this
may impact
of
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minimise
the
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air pollution
as well as
noise pollution.
This
environment provides
pupil
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to live freely and comfortably.
Moreover
, it is
also
feasible for . So
this
is the finest solution to live in urban spaces. In
countryside
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, many
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can perform outdoor
excerises
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exercises
to help in daily life.
For example
, fishing, hunting, camping and hiking.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban sprawl
  • public transport infrastructure
  • commutes
  • residential density
  • ecological footprint
  • overcrowding
  • urban planning
  • car-sharing
  • traffic management
  • rural preservation
  • transportation policies
  • electric vehicles
  • sustainable living
  • incentivize
  • telecommuting
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