Your friend back home has arranged a visit to your hometown for one week next month but due to some reason, you are not able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for not being able to go explain to him the situation tell him an alternative plan for your visit

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Dear Sara, I am

gald

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glad

all things are working out for you I am thrilled to hear that

your

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you're

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planned

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to visit our hometown It

was

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a long time since

meet

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I have some reasons I will not be in Saudi Arabia

therefore

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, I want to

aplogize

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apologise

for

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you I won’t be with you

due to

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my mother wants to visit her mother in Korea during that time we are going to stay for 3 weeks as you informed me you will

left

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leave

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in 2 weeks which is we are not able to each other. You will be happy to know that our friend Ali from high school

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apply

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is in my hometown

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these

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these

thease

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these

days he wants to meet you you can

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manage

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managed

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him to hangout I am thinking after

travel

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to Korea to visit your hometown it

have

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been a long time

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since I

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don’t see your parents

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, we will

arrangment

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arrange it

soon .

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sincerely, Ruqayah

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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Your friend back home has arranged a visit to your hometown for one week next month but due to some reason, you are not able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for not being able to go explain to him the situation tell him an alternative plan for your visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

New research showed that overeating has become bigger problem in the world than hunger. What are the reasons of this problem? How can solve it?

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while other believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. discuss both views and give your opinion.

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.