Your friend back home has arranged a visit to your hometown for one week next month but due to some reason, you are not able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for not being able to go explain to him the situation tell him an alternative plan for your visit

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Dear Sara, I am

gald

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glad

all things are working out for you I am thrilled to hear that

your

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you're

you are

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planned

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are planning

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to visit our hometown It

was

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has been

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a long time since

meet

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I have some reasons I will not be in Saudi Arabia

therefore

, I want to

aplogize

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apologise

for

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you I won’t be with you

due to

my mother wants to visit her mother in Korea during that time we are going to stay for 3 weeks as you informed me you will

left

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in 2 weeks which is we are not able to each other. You will be happy to know that our friend Ali from high school

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apply

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is in my hometown

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these

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these

thease

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these

days he wants to meet you you can

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manage

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managed

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him to hangout I am thinking after

travel

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to Korea to visit your hometown it

have

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been a long time

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since I

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don’t see your parents

consequently

, we will

arrangment

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arrange it

soon .

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sincerely, Ruqayah

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

158 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem?

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