Your friend back home has arranged a visit to your hometown for one week next month but due to some reason, you are not able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for not being able to go explain to him the situation tell him an alternative plan for your visit

Dear Sara, I am
gald
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glad
all things are working out for you I am thrilled to hear that
your
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you're
you are
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planned
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are planning
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to visit our hometown It
was
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has been
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a long time since
meet
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met
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I have some reasons I will not be in Saudi Arabia
therefore
, I want to
aplogize
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apologise
for
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you I won’t be with you
due to
my mother wants to visit her mother in Korea during that time we are going to stay for 3 weeks as you informed me you will
left
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leave
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in 2 weeks which is we are not able to each other. You will be happy to know that our friend Ali from high school
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he
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is in my hometown
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these
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these
thease
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these
days he wants to meet you you can
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manage
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managed
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him to hangout I am thinking after
travel
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traveling
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to Korea to visit your hometown it
have
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has
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been a long time
I
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since I
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don’t see your parents
consequently
, we will
arrangment
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arrange it
soon .
Your
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sincerely, Ruqayah
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