Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . describe the photograph you sent to the competition . tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown . invite him/her to the exhibition
Dear Jamie,
I hope you are healthy. I am writing to
about
what recently won a photography competition. I would be honoured if you could pay a visit to the exhibition.
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, I took part in the competition. Besides
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table and consumed a palatable meal. I ponder a communicative chef.
Please indicate whether you will be able to attend the exhibition. Please let me know as soon as possible.
Take care
Yours faithfully
Daniel.Correct your spelling
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Task Achievement
Try to provide a clear description of the photograph and the exhibition details to ensure your letter is fully developed.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your ideas more logically and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for greater clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use transitions effectively to create a smooth flow from one idea to the next.
Task Achievement
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed directly to meet the task requirements fully.
Task Achievement
Your friendly tone and effort to invite your friend to the exhibition are commendable.
Coherence & Cohesion
The structure of your letter, including a greeting and closing, adheres to the conventions of a personal letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,