The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of producing of
orange Change preposition
apply
juice
.
There are various stages in the process
of making orange juice
, beginning with the collection of fresh oranges and ending with the distribution of packaged juice
to supermarkets.
Firstly
, oranges are picked, loaded onto trucks, and delivered to a processing plant where they are thoroughly washed by a machine. Following
this
, the juice
is extracted from the oranges by a squeezing machine, and the solid waste, including orange peels and seeds, is collected and used to feed animals. The squeezed juice
can then
either be packaged and sent to the supermarket, or transferred to another factory to undergo an evaporation process
.
During the evaporation process
, the fresh orange juice
is processed by an evaporator machine where the water is removed. The concentrated juice
is then
canned and transported to a warehouse before being combined with water again. After that, it is packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased.Submitted by halah.z.alamri on
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