The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.

The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced.
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The diagram illustrates the
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of producing
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orange
juice
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. There are various stages in the
process
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of making orange
juice
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, beginning with the collection of fresh oranges and ending with the distribution of packaged
juice
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to supermarkets.
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, oranges are picked, loaded onto trucks, and delivered to a processing plant where they are thoroughly washed by a machine.
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this
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, the
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is extracted from the oranges by a squeezing machine, and the solid waste, including orange peels and seeds, is collected and used to feed animals. The squeezed
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either be packaged and sent to the supermarket, or transferred to another factory to undergo an evaporation
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. During the evaporation
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, the fresh orange
juice
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is processed by an evaporator machine where the water is removed. The concentrated
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is
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canned and transported to a warehouse before being combined with water again. After that, it is packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, juice with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Orchard
  • Harvest
  • Processing facility
  • Quality control
  • Extraction
  • Pasteurization
  • Filtration
  • Preservatives
  • Fortification
  • Deaeration
  • Shelf life
  • Distribution
  • Bottling
  • Packaging
  • Labeling
  • Environmental impact
  • Sustainability
  • Waste management
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