The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
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The table compares the household’s monthly expenditure in terms of six different categories over two separate years in 1991 and 2001.
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it is clear that
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for the most part included in the table the spending pattern witnessed an upward trend except for Clothing and transport in the mentioned years.
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the table in 1991 the highest amount of Australia’s people's budget went to other goods and services which increased slightly from 250 to 270 in 2001. The figure for Electricity and water saw a gradual rise from 75 to 120 Australian dollars per month over a 10-year period.
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food and housing experienced the same growing pattern in these two years. Compared with
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growth,
in contrast
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, the numbers for transport in 1991 was 70
AUD
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reduced dramatically to 45
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in 2001. Simultaneously, spending on clothing fell minimally. In detail, the amount of money citizens used for it in 1991 was 30
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and in 2001 was only 20
AUD
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