The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party. Explain why you won’t be able to attend the party. Give details of a plan and see Chris at a different time. Begin your letter as : Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,

#parents #australian #friend #chris #surprise #birthday #party #chris’s #won’t #plan #time #mr #mrs #collins

Dear Mr Collins, I'm writing to thank you for inviting me to your place on the

ocassion

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Chris

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birthday.I'm sure that Chrish will enjoy the party as he is turning 18 ,I

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heard many of our childhood friends are attending the party and he will be surely

suprised

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seeing

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our classmates at the event. As you are aware

the

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i'm

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planning to do my bachelors

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Chicago .I have to attend the orientation and register for the subjects that

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to complete in the first year. Generally, the college starts

at the end

of July

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the pandemic they want to start in August .So

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have to attend

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college for sure.I know

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will miss all of you but will be in touch virtually. My parents are going to visit my place in the month of

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for

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christmas

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holidays,Chris and my other classmates planned to meet at my place to celebrate the festival and we will have fun.If

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dont

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December the doors are open for you. Once again thank you for inviting me .Keep in touch, Yours lovingly, Vicky

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192 words

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