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As the nuclear
arms
 race has
been
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escalated, after
1960s
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 the concept of
ARMS
CONTROL
 was created. It means to
control
development
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the development
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 and
deployed
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 of military power or a specific weapon system.
This
 is an international decision, Ultimately it is aimed at inhibiting nuclear
test
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tests
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 and preventing world war. And
this
 includes
documented
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 agreement
as well as
 informal self-regulation. In the past, the United States
singed
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signed
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 multiple quantitative
arms
control
agreements
 with the Soviet Union during the Cold War. The agreement limited their stockpiles of nuclear
weapons
 and intercontinental ballistic missiles. It mean that the number of
weapons
were
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 limited to produce, store and deploy.
Also
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 some
agreements
 can ban certain types
weapons
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of weapons
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.
For example
, the Chemical
Weapons
 Convention (CWC) forbids making and using
weapons
 like sarin or mustard gas. NPT, Nuclear
nonproliferation treaty
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Nonproliferation Treaty
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 is included the
Arms
control
.
This
make
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 it
is
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impossible to get nuclear
weapons
 except for certain countries
such
 as
US
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the US
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, China, France, England,
Russia
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and Russia
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.
However
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 these
agreements
 have specific limitations.
Firstly
, countries can
choice
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 or deny international laws for their
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own benefits
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benefits
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.
In particular
, North
Korea
, India, Pakistan,
Israel
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and Israel
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 don’t accept NPT, they all have
the
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Nuclear
weapons
.
Secondly
, even if any
countries
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 breaks the rules, it cannot be punished. Syria, which signed the CWC, has used banned chemical
weapons
over
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 10 years, but the International community has failed to stop them.
Thirdly
, the
agreements
 cannot cover development technologies very fast. On the one hand, especially in
Korea
, the government organized
“
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Korea
Arms
control verification
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Control Verification
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 Agency”
deal
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 with
a
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North
Korea
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Korea's
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 problems. They have been trying to reduce tensions between South and North
Korea
 through
arm
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control
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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