The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
The pie chart describes the percentage of people who graduated from universities, attended school
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and did not complete any formal education, with categories for male and female,
while
the bar chart illustrates data pertaining to the educational attainment of the population in Glasgow, Scotland, based on various generations during 2010.
Overall
, the significant majority of dwellers who were till 50 ages and the half of residents who were between 50 and 75 ages were well-educated
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university degrees,
while
the over-75
age
group is dominated by those without any education.It can
also
be seen that the percentage of men and
women
was considerably close to each other in all classifications.
To begin
with,
although
the number of 16–50-year-olds who get academic degrees stood at 70%, it was a notable proportion of them. There was an abrupt declivity to half in the 50–75
age
group and to a quarter in the above-75
age
group.
In addition
to
this
,
while
the rate of school-certified individuals was approximately 20%,
this
was a very small number above 75.
Following
this
, the majority of people who don't have any education were above the
age
of 75.
Additionally
, the percentage of people who have a school degree was the same for both men and
women
.
Subsequently
, the number of highly educated men was higher by 3% than that of
this
category of
women
, and the rate of non-educated
women
was 38%.
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  • percentage distribution
  • educational levels
  • qualifications
  • higher education
  • school level qualifications
  • no qualifications
  • proportions
  • notable trends
  • outliers
  • age demographics
  • economic conditions
  • social policies
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