The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
The pie chart describes the percentage of people who graduated from universities, attended school
,
and did not complete any formal education, with categories for male and female, Remove the comma
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the bar chart illustrates data pertaining to the educational attainment of the population in Glasgow, Scotland, based on various generations during 2010.
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Overall
, the significant majority of dwellers who were till 50 ages and the half of residents who were between 50 and 75 ages were well-educated Linking Words
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the over-75 Linking Words
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was considerably close to each other in all classifications.
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the number of 16–50-year-olds who get academic degrees stood at 70%, it was a notable proportion of them. There was an abrupt declivity to half in the 50–75 Linking Words
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group and to a quarter in the above-75 Use synonyms
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the rate of school-certified individuals was approximately 20%, Linking Words
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was a very small number above 75. Linking Words
Following
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, the majority of people who don't have any education were above the Linking Words
age
of 75.
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Additionally
, the percentage of people who have a school degree was the same for both men and Linking Words
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Subsequently
, the number of highly educated men was higher by 3% than that of Linking Words
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women
was 38%.Use synonyms
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