The charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.
The pie chart describes the percentage of people who graduated from universities, attended school
,
and did not complete any formal education, with categories for male and female, Remove the comma
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the bar chart illustrates data pertaining to the educational attainment of the population in Glasgow, Scotland, based on various generations during 2010.
Overall
, the significant majority of dwellers who were till 50 ages and the half of residents who were between 50 and 75 ages were well-educated as
university degrees, Change preposition
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while
the over-75 age
group is dominated by those without any education.It can also
be seen that the percentage of men and women
was considerably close to each other in all classifications.
To begin
with, although
the number of 16–50-year-olds who get academic degrees stood at 70%, it was a notable proportion of them. There was an abrupt declivity to half in the 50–75 age
group and to a quarter in the above-75 age
group. In addition
to this
, while
the rate of school-certified individuals was approximately 20%, this
was a very small number above 75. Following
this
, the majority of people who don't have any education were above the age
of 75.
Additionally
, the percentage of people who have a school degree was the same for both men and women
. Subsequently
, the number of highly educated men was higher by 3% than that of this
category of women
, and the rate of non-educated women
was 38%.Submitted by semabayramova00 on
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