The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of American households
according to
their yearly income
in 2007, 2011, and 2015. The count of households is measured in millions. Overall
, moderate earnings was
relatively stable Change the verb form
were
while
the highest income
group experienced an upward trend in the given period.
To begin
with, majority
of United States residents earn more than $100,000 annually. The count began at just below 30 million in 2007 and slightly decreased by less than five Correct article usage
the majority
millions
in 2011. Change to singular
million
Subsequently
, this
number grew moderately to approximately 34 million, reaching its peak in the concluding period.
Looking into more details
, the lowest yearly salary group, with less than $25,000 per household, witnessed a mild fluctuation between 2011 to 2015. The number peaked at just below 30 Fix the agreement mistake
detail
millions
in 2011. Change to singular
million
Similarly
, group
with the second Add an article
a group
the group
least
Correct word choice
lowest
income
faced the same pattern. On the other hand
, the two moderate
Add a hyphen
moderate-income
income
groups, ranging from $50,000 to $99,999 remain
relatively steady during the observation period.Wrong verb form
remained
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 3 times.
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