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PRACTICE 3 - Population of Asian Elephants The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004

PRACTICE 3 - Population of Asian Elephants The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004
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The diagram above illustrates the estimated highest
amount
 of Asian elephants.
Overall
, all elephants throughout Asia decreased, with India
had
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 the biggest
amount
 and China
had
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 the least. On the one hand, in the year 1997, India had the most
elephant
 population with the
amount
 of 10000 individuals,
follow
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 by Myanmar with 5500 and Thailand with about 4000. But in 2004, the
amount
 of
elephant
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elephants
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 dropped sharply with India
dropped
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dropping
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 by 2000, Myanmar
dropped
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 by 200 and Thailand with 2500. Another country with the least
elephant
 is China with the
number
 of just nearly 1000.
This
 is because the trend of hunting
elephant
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elephants
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 for
its
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their
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 ivory increased in many countries, especially in the one listed above.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
elephant
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elephants
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 in Vietnam, Sri Lanka, Laos and Cambodia didn’t
decreased
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 as much as the countries above. In 1997, the
number
 of individuals in Vietnam, Laos,
Cambodia
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and Cambodia
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nearly
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 equal
with
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to
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 each other with
the
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an
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 estimated
amount
 of about 1000. In 2004, the
number
 didn’t
decreased
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decrease
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 much because those countries had policies which
protect
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protected
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 the
elephant
 from danger.
Also
, the
number
 of
elephant
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elephants
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 in Sri Lanka didn’t decrease much
with
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for
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 the same reason.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, elephant, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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