The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table graph depicts the figure for expenditures on daily necessities in four European and one Middle-East
countries
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in 2002.
Overall
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, it is obvious that all nations purchased the most food/drinks/tobacco,
while
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the least consumption was on leisure and education. In terms of food/drinks/tobacco, the Turkish spent the most at 32.14%, which recorded more than double compared to the Swedish who consumed the goods the least among those five nations (15.77%). Ireland
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experienced considerably higher consumption of these groceries at 28.91%,
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, the rest of the
countries
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,
such
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as Spain and Italy witnessed a similar proportion of expenditures on those commodities, 18.80% and 16.36% respectively.
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the data in clothing/footwear, there was a significant remarkable number of these goods in Italy at 9%,
whereas
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the figure for these necessities in Turkey, Spain, Ireland, and Sweden was only between 6% and 5%.
It is clear that
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all five nations were less paying for leisure/education. Spanish was the least consumer for those categories (1.98%),
on the other hand
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, Turkish experienced almost triple (4.35%) compared to Spanish and double to Irish (2.21%). The remaining
countries
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averaged around 3.2%.
To sum up
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, the expenditure on food/drinks/tobacco was by far the most in all
countries
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, and Turkey spent the largest amount of money on all three categories of items.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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