The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of
crime
(
burglary
, car theft and robbery) which was committed in Manchester city over 9
years
from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, there was a significant drop in the
number
of
burglary
cases, whilst robbing and car stealing figures were fairly steady over the given period. At the start
years
,
burglary
was the most popular
crime
, which was replaced by car theft from 2007 to 2012. With regards to the amount of
burglary
committed, it began at about 3400 and peaked at over or less 3700 in 2004 before falling dramatically to the bottom at just over 1000 in 2008. In the remained
years
, the
number
of
burglary
cases went off its 2008 bottom, remaining steady at nearly 1500.
On the other hand
, the
number
of cars stolen started at approximately 2300 as the second
popular
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crime
.
This
figure, which reached a bottom of just 2000 three
years
later, rose back slightly in the final
years
to about 2800 in 2012, remaining the most popular
crime
. Meanwhile, over 600 robbery cases were committed in the first year, after which the
number
peaked at about 900 and
then
fell back and remained stable at around 600 from 2006 to the end year.
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