The graph below shows the number of tourists of visiting a particular Carribean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists of visiting a particular Carribean Island between 2010 and 2017. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares the
number
of people who visited a specific
Carribean
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Caribbean
Island
along with
the type of their accommodations over a period of 7
years
.
Overall
, the total
number
of
visitors
had a significant increase during these
years
.
Also
, the
amount
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of tourists who stayed on both cruise ships and
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the island
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island
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islands
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experienced an increasing trend from 2010 to 2017. In 2010, the initial
number
of
visitors
who spent their time on
island
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the island
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was about half a million larger than that
of
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stayed on cruise ships ( 750,000 and 250,000 people respectively). From 2010 to 2015 the
number
of
island
residents was larger than cruise
ships
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residents,
while
in the
last
two
years
of the period, their positions changed and reached a peak at 1.5
millions
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million
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and 2
millions
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million
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respectively. The total
number
of tourists had the lowest amount in 2010 ( 1
miliion
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million
visitors
) and had a steady rise for 5
years
. After that, it
remaind
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remained
remains
static until 2016.
Then
it reached its highest amount in 2017 (3.5
millions
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million
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of
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visitors
).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, years, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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