The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The given diagram illustrates the changes in
salmon
life period from egg to adult fish. From an overall
perspective, there are seven steps to bringing up a salmon
in the three various places which include the river, estuary, and the ocean
As observed in the details, in the first, two adult salmon
have migrated from the ocean to the river in order to make their eggs after mating. Then
, the eggs are taken into incubation form. After the past of a certain time, newborn fishes have emerged from eggs. While
they have grown up, they have been transported to fresh water in the estuary site.
In the next step, salmons lived for a limited time together in there, and then
they migrated into the ocean. So, salmon
fish have bred in here. Finally
, adult salmon
have found a pair, and they have transferred to the river in order to start the mating or intercross step. All steps repeat again in salmon
life.Submitted by minasarani64 on
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