many chilren are encouraged by their parent to get a part time job. what are the advantages and disadvantages to children doing so?

There is no denying the fact that

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working is an essential thing in life.

While

it is a commonly held belief that free

time

should be invested in beneficial things, There is

also

an argument that opposes it. I consider that

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Parents have a good Point of view and I totally agree with them. On the one hand , starting

work

at a young age opens many doors, and helps young people to know themselves and others.

In other words

, when they are under pressure they will understand their hopes and their strength and weaknesses in different kinds of jobs.

Moreover

,

this

will give them a clear view of the future career that they might be seeking,

thus

, they would get a good look at changing their life now

this

could help them to match their future environment's

work

.

On the other hand

, spending a lot of

time

busy with multiple things

such

as applying to various jobs will reduce the amount of

time

that you could hang out with family and friends.

Therefore

,

this

will

work

significantly in peoples's social lives, and they will have fewer and fewer friends each

time

.

Moreover

, the thickness of working life could decrease their desire and excitement toward any job at an early age.

For instance

, if you encourage your teenager to

work

and he starts with all kind-hearted trying to satisfy everyone around them and doing things that are not part of his job,

this

would make them hate his workmate and lead to trust issues. In conclusion, there are many pros and cons, and despite having different views, I tend to believe that, working is the best thing any parents offer to their child, even if they struggle at first

at the end

of the day they will be better version of themselves, so I totally agree with

this

statement