many chilren are encouraged by their parent to get a part time job. what are the advantages and disadvantages to children doing so?

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There is no denying the fact that
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working is an essential thing in life.
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it is a commonly held belief that free
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should be invested in beneficial things, There is
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an argument that opposes it. I consider that
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Parents have a good Point of view and I totally agree with them. On the one hand , starting
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at a young age opens many doors, and helps young people to know themselves and others.
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, when they are under pressure they will understand their hopes and their strength and weaknesses in different kinds of jobs.
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will give them a clear view of the future career that they might be seeking,
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, they would get a good look at changing their life now
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could help them to match their future environment's
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, spending a lot of
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busy with multiple things
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as applying to various jobs will reduce the amount of
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that you could hang out with family and friends.
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,
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will
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significantly in peoples's social lives, and they will have fewer and fewer friends each
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, the thickness of working life could decrease their desire and excitement toward any job at an early age.
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, if you encourage your teenager to
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and he starts with all kind-hearted trying to satisfy everyone around them and doing things that are not part of his job,
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would make them hate his workmate and lead to trust issues. In conclusion, there are many pros and cons, and despite having different views, I tend to believe that, working is the best thing any parents offer to their child, even if they struggle at first
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of the day they will be better version of themselves, so I totally agree with
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