It is often tought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this issue?

It can be considered that a high rate of juvenile delinquency is mostly related to

media

violence

. In my opinion, I strongly agree with

this

statement.

Nevertheless

, there are some solutions that can be taken to tackle teenage crimes namely limiting the watching time and controlling the

media

.

Firstly

,

violence

in the

media

can

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adverse influence on youngster's attitudes and behaviors.

In other words

, watching violent films or playing

this

type of video

games

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by young people may push them

mimicking

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violent acts in real-time.

For example

, some movie stars are good role models for teens to follow, so they can imitate their

behaviors

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like shooting, stealing or others.

Hence

, they can be easily influenced because of their immaturity and

lacking

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of parental guidance.

Secondly

, the reason why

media

may affect

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crime

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by minors is their mental diseases.

In particular

,

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mental illnesses can be affected by watching violent scenes.

Finally

, there are two solutions to combat

this

issue.

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of the effective ways is limiting the viewing time of violent films or online video games by them.

Furthermore

, parents must set clear guidelines for using

media

by their kids and they should involve them

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extracurricular activities. If parents

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monitor their children's

media

activities, it allows

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prevent a possible committing

crimes

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by minors. Another measure is that governments have to

stricter

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control the mass

media

.

For instance

, all mass

media

should be checked

on

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including harassment and inappropriate

contents

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, which need to be banned by authorities.

To sum up

, I believe that

media

violence

is simply

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of real-world

violence

for youngsters.

However

, destructive

media

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should always be restricted and these significant steps to protect young people from potential harm.