The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows a civic centre between the present and its plan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps, illustrate a comparison between
person's
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plan and a future plan in the civil centre.
Overall
, it's clear that the parking will be replaced by a cafe.
However
, in the future
will replace
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,
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the underground and library with
office
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offices
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cancel
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will cancelled
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. On one hand, now
that is
the plan of ground, have two part car, but in the future all removing it.
Instead
of it they will put other
facility
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facilities
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, Sasha's restaurant, hotel, and coffee.
Moreover
, they were replacing exhibitions with
library
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libraries
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.
On the other hand
,
according to
this
change, the parking will be tiny compared to now because the town hold has been built in the same location.
However
, there are some buildings that will not change ,
for example
, the shopping Centre and movie studios, which people use to buy their things from it.
While
we look at
this
biggest variation we will notice the street will not be a strange place for people.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Civic centre
  • Present
  • Plan
  • Comparison
  • Main features
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Information
  • Report
  • Relevant
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