Bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.
The bar chart illustrates released
carbon
numbers by seven separate nations in 1975, 1990, and 2005. Overall
, the amount of Carbon
radiation increased in all nations except Germany and the UK, which declined marginally. Furthermore
, the USA produced the highest quantity of carbon
as opposed to Canada and the UK, with the lowest carbon
volumes.
In 1975, carbon
emissions by the USA at 1200000 thousand
metric tons
, which was overwhelmingly more remarkable than other countries, climbed to 1600000 thousand
metric tons
in 2005. That was followed by China, which, after a moderate growth from around 300000 thousand
metric tons
to just above 600000 thousand
metric tons
, surged to roughly 1500000 thousand
metric tons
in the last
year.
On the other hand
, by 1975, carbon
leaking by Canada and India at approximately 10000 thousand
metric tons
for both countries, which was significantly less than in other areas, experienced upward trends close to 20000000 and 30000000 metric tons
in the last
year respectively. In contrast
, there was a downward trend in the UK and Germany figure
from around 200000000 Correct subject-verb agreement
figures
tons
for both zones in 200000 and just under 200000 in 2005, respectively.Submitted by ehsan1990 on
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