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Bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.

Bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years.
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The bar chart illustrates released
carbon
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 numbers by seven separate nations in 1975, 1990, and 2005.
Overall
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, the amount of
Carbon
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 radiation increased in all nations except Germany and the UK, which declined marginally.
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, the USA produced the highest quantity of
carbon
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 as opposed to Canada and the UK, with the lowest
carbon
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 volumes. In 1975,
carbon
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 emissions by the USA at 1200000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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, which was overwhelmingly more remarkable than other countries, climbed to 1600000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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 in 2005. That was followed by China, which, after a moderate growth from around 300000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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 to just above 600000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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, surged to roughly 1500000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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 in the
last
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 year.
On the other hand
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, by 1975,
carbon
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 leaking by Canada and India at approximately 10000
thousand
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 metric
tons
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 for both countries, which was significantly less than in other areas, experienced upward trends close to 20000000 and 30000000 metric
tons
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 in the
last
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 year respectively.
In contrast
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, there was a downward trend in the UK and Germany
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 from around 200000000
tons
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 for both zones in 200000 and just under 200000 in 2005, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, thousand, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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