Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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there

are

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many

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information about the detrimental effects on

health

,

this

kind of information still

do

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not prevent many people from smoking. As far as I am concerned, we have to care about

this

issue

because it

do

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not only do harm to individuals but

also

to their family and the public. In order to

adress

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address

this

issue

, we could take a few steps to stop people from smoking. The

dange

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dangers

danger

dance

of smoking

do

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not only

negetively

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negatively

impact personal

health

but

it

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also

will do

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harm to their

love

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ones and society.

Therefore

, we should take

this

issue

seriously.

First,

according to

many studies, smoking is

proved

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to be harmful

for

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the lung

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lung

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lungs

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. If one is a heavy smoker,

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one is likely to have diseases related to

lung

,

such

as

lung

cancer.

Moreover

, if a person suffers from

lung

cancer, his life quality will be affected.

For instance

, he may need to pay doctors for a lot of money.

Second

, the family of

smokers

will be affected. They are more likely to receive

second hand

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smoking

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, which is

also

harmful

for

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health

. If

smokers

are ill

due to

the disease caused by smoking, their loved ones may forced to bear the burden to take of them. It is challenging for

thier

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their

family because it will affect their mental well-being as well.

Third,

many people like to

smoke

at public places,

such

as bus stops, train stations, and parks. Those non-

smokers

are forced to receive

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second hand

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smoking

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smoke

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. Their

health

are

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is

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also

affected.

Hence

, we should take

actions

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to solve

this

issue

. There are two ways to address

this

issue

.

First,

the

government

should endorse a law to

prohibt

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prohibit

smokers

to

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from smoking

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smoke

at

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in

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public places,

such

as schools, parks, and bus stops. If they violate the law, they should be fined.

Second

, the authorities should demand

the

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heavy

smokers

to

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attend courses or workshops which will help them reduce smoking.

Also

, the

government

could encourage those heavy

smokers

to seek help

frm

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from

psychological

counseling

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counselling

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because the root problem is mental issues.

For example

, some of them may want to reduce their stress, so they

smoke

.

Third,

the

government

should impose a higher tax on the producers of

smoke

.

This

might discourage them

to produce

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from producing

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smokes. To

concule

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conclude

, smoking is a serious problem facing the world today. It is not only harmful

for

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smokers

,

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, but

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it

also

will affect

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their loved ones and the whole

society

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of society

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.

Therefore

, the

government

should establish effective policies to help those

smokers

and reduce the production of

smoke

.