Students at schools and the university learn far more from lessons with the teachers than from other source (such as internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion asserting that
teachers
can play a more vital role in teaching students
in educational institutions rather than other sources through the Internet or television. While
either internet-based or TV-based courses
can be beneficial in some cases, I am of the opinion that face-to-face contact enables students
to resolve educational issues.
The main advantage of both online courses
and courses
shown on TV is that students
can attend these courses
wherever they want. This
is because if students
reside in areas far away from educational systems, they may have to move a long distance to reach schools or universities, which may result in a time-consuming activity. Ergo, such
courses
may be able to create a pedagogical environment in their inhabitants without transportation. For example
, in Vietnam, after students
in the countryside utilized online classes, the studies indicated a drastic increase in the number of graduated students
.
Notwithstanding, it is undeniable that a close relationship with teachers
can associated with several benefits. Initially
, with close contact with teachers
, students
can ask questions from teachers
during classes to solve their uncertainties, followed by a better understanding of subjects. Moreover
, as teachers
can set homework and quizzes, they can assess the performance of students
effectively, thus
monitoring their progress. In addition
, when educators present high weaknesses during courses
, teachers
are likely to alter their teaching methods, leading to the improvement of the learning process.
In conclusion, even though long-distance learning via the Internet and television may be advantageous to some deprived students
, indisputably, productive teaching techniques will be achieved by a close connection because not only do students
overcome difficulties with the aid of teachers
but also
teachers
improve their methods with the aids of students
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