The two pie charts show the average spending by households in a country at two different points in its economic development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts display the expenditure of households in one nation
while
there was an improvement in its economy from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
,it is evident from the diagrams that over the years,there was a shift as the amounts spent on food reduced drastically and more money was alloted
to recreation and other items.
Correct your spelling
allocated
allotted
allowed
To begin
with,In 1920,households bought Foods
at 71.9% hitting the peak.But,there was a sharp fall to 21.8% by 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
Food
However
,a significant increase was observed in recreation and travelling as it stood at 34.2% and 14.3% respectively by 2000.
Furthermore
, Although
,Little amounts went to Housing,Clothing,Education,Medical
care in 1920, it rose steadily over the years.Correct word choice
and Medical
In Contrast
,A minority of the spendings
were for fuel and household goods at the beginning of the period. Still,it fell slightly to 6.3% and 3.1% by 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
spending
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