Due to the development and fast exapansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small business are unable to compete. Some people believe that the of small business will bring about the death of the local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries , developed countries to be specific ,

supermarkets

are developing and

rapily exapanding

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rapidly expanding

leaving small

business

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with less potential to compete. A number of people have an assumption that local

communities

will not exit if small

business

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businesses

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are not actively operating. I disagree with the idea that

this

is the end of them. It is without doubt that large

business

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businesses

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such

as

supermarkets

are expanding fast in several nations, and there are few benefits as to why they should substitute small

business

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businesses

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. One of the main reason is that

supermarkets

can create employment opportunities

to

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individuals that

lives

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in these

communities

as

result

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the local

communities

will continue to grow.

For example

,

Supermarkets

employee

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employ

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more people

to

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apply

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work in different

department

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departments

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in their stores

such

as cashiers, cooks ,

drivers

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and drivers

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, just to

metion

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mention

a few.

Moreover

,

supermarket

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supermarkets

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offer convenience and variety to consumers since they get products from different

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and will be able to compare the prices before

buy

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buying

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unlike buying

fom

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from

the

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small

business

.

Although

bigger companies are more powerful in many

way

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, local

business

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businesses

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can still find a way to survive and the future of the local

communities

can not be determined by them.

To begin

with, there are some advantages for local

business

that can not

be replace

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,

for instance

, the relationship the owner of a small

business

have and the customers, their interaction

develop

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into

friendship

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that can't be

replace

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which will make the customers always come back to support the

business

due to

the

relatioship

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relationship

they share.

Moreover

, the culture of local

communities

is not just about commercial activities, is

the

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about the

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value of supporting each other when in need.

Otherwise

, it would just be another market. In conclusion ,

supermarkets

contribute to the

declined

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decline

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of small

business

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businesses

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but the effect of

supermarkets

on local

communities

can be mitigated and the

sprit

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spirit

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of local

communities

can still thrive.