The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart indicates the
proportion
of distribution energy sources in a given country through a decade from 1995 to 2005. Divided into 5 categories, coal and
gas
remained stable in 10 years
while
petro had the most reduced
proportion
among other categories. In 1995, the energy distribution was mainly taken by 3 categories, which are coal,
gas
, and petro with almost 30% each. A decade later, only coal and
gas
that
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could stabilise their
proportion
, coal from 29.80% slightly increased to 30.93%. Comparably with coal,
gas
also
rose from 29.63% to 30.31% By 2005, the
proportion
of petro had decreased
almost
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10% in the
last
10 years, from 29.7% dropped exactly 19.55%. With the remaining
proportion
, nuclear has almost doubled its
proportion
, from 6.40% to 10.10%. The ‘other’ category
also
fluctuated around 90% with 9.10% from 4.90%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • industries
  • electricity usage
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • service sector
  • manufacturing sector
  • residential sector
  • agricultural sector
  • main features
  • summarize
  • reporting
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