The two pie charts show how different industries used electricity in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart indicates the
proportion
of distribution energy sources in a given country through a decade from 1995 to 2005. Divided into 5 categories, coal and gas
remained stable in 10 years while
petro had the most reduced proportion
among other categories.
In 1995, the energy distribution was mainly taken by 3 categories, which are coal, gas
, and petro with almost 30% each. A decade later, only coal and gas
that
could stabilise their Correct pronoun usage
apply
proportion
, coal from 29.80% slightly increased to 30.93%. Comparably with coal, gas
also
rose from 29.63% to 30.31%
By 2005, the proportion
of petro had decreased almost
10% in the Change preposition
by almost
last
10 years, from 29.7% dropped exactly 19.55%. With the remaining proportion
, nuclear has almost doubled its proportion
, from 6.40% to 10.10%. The ‘other’ category also
fluctuated around 90% with 9.10% from 4.90%Submitted by andini23 on
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