In the developed world ,average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In the modern world ,the typical lifespan is increasing significantly.Many

people

think that the trend is a positive development.

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following essay will discuss the effect of

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positive trend

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and some of the ways that could be considered in addressing the problem. It is a fact that

people

are living longer because of the advancement of technology.Despite the positive development,the ageing population has caused some

issue

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issues

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for

governments

.

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if

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number of senior

people

increase

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increases

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governments

will spend a lot of money

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them.

Secondly

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the growing number of

people

will be caused

with

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density problems.

As a result

,the demand will rise for accommodation and increase the

prise

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price

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of properties.

However

,there are some steps that

governments

could consider to resolve the issue.One of the

way

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ways

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is that

governments

must extend pension

age

standard

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standards

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.Many countries have

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standard pension

age

at

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age

of 55 years old,and they must extend the

age

into

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60 or 65 years.Because the old

people

look still in a healthy and prime condition.

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this

way,

governments

' spending will reduce for the retired

people

.

To conclude

,the world

is

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has been

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developing rapidly in the

last

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few years,money

are

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is

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being spent

for

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on

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the

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old

people

by

governments

and the

growing

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growth

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of

people

have caused

problem

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the problem

a problem

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.

However

,

this

situation could be solved by

governments

.