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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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It is commonly argued that scientists predict that humankind in the future will use identical dialects in the future. Personally, I neither completely agree nor disagree with
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 statement for a variety of reasons. I partly agree that using similar
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 helps facilitate international communication .One of the main reasons can be that people can break their linguistic barrier and create a means of communication. Another reason can be that sharing the same
language
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 helps us work better together.
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, being able to communicate in the same
tongue
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 provides a critical role in problem-solving.
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, the similarity in
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 systems makes a great contribution to the development of societies.
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, English is utilized in research and operation in highly developed countries and
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 used in high-profile or worldwide organizations like WHO, NCBI, WWF,…
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, I halfway disagree with the viewpoint that abandoning the mother
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 for a monolingual future.
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 is because the local
tongue
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 is a country’s core identity, It represents the symbolizes their origins and defining characters different languages have multiple cultural diversity and historical values.
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, Vietnamese folks are well known for their intriguing ways of pronouns and different meanings in one word,
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 for their mother
tongue
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 accent in various areas around the country. In conclusion, despite having a global
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 that might become dominant globally
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 the higher development of societies and breaking the
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 barriers,
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 action might bring many drawbacks and effects that lead to losing identity.

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task response
The essay provides a balanced viewpoint, but the response could be clearer by taking a stronger position.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of the essay is generally logical, but the introduction and conclusion could be more distinct, and the link between ideas could be strengthened.
lexical resource
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are instances of repetitive language and expressions that could be improved.
grammatical range
The essay shows a reasonable command of grammatical structures, but there are areas for improvement, such as sentence structure and word choice.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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