the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The given line graph illustrates how many

store

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stores

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was closed and new store

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apply

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that

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apply

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opened in a particular country over a period of 7 years from 2011 to 2018. Units are measured in

number

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a number

the number

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of times

close

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they close

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and open per year.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the shop with the highest level at the start of

close

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closing

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shops

slightly dropped

whereas

the opening

shops

experienced a dramatic decrease throughout the given period. In terms of the shop with the highest level at the start, the

amount

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number

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of opening

shops

stood at exactly 8500 in 2011. The consumption

then

declined significantly by precisely 4000 in the next year, 2012. It

then

experienced a dramatic increase to 6000 in 2014. From

the

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that

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point onwards, it

fall

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fell

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moderately and hit a trough

to

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of

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3000 in 2018. Regarding the typical

shops

with the second highest level at the start, closure

shops

started at exactly 6500 in 2011. The figure for

close

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closed

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shops

decreased slightly to around 6000 in 2014 before hitting a trough at exactly 500 in 2015. After that, the graph experienced a dramatic growth and remained stable by 10% between 2016 and 2018.