The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. 

Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph describes the number of revenues from three different genres of
books
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separated from the
year
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2002 to 2006, namely fictional, educational, and children. As observed from the chart, there was more appreciation for the children’s genre than the other
books
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. Since 2002,
books
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for the younger population experienced a gradual increase from around 30
million
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dollars to as high as 55
million
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in 2006,
while
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surpassing the sales of adult fiction one
year
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after the data was recorded. The latter topics had a disappointing pattern. Raked the highest revenue in 2002 by 45
million
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dollars, the fictional novel continued to regress until reached the lowest amount of
books
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sold in 2006 by less than 30
million
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, even getting passed by educational
books
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. Education publications that were once positioned as the lowest customer shares in the first
year
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slowly gained more revenue by around 30
million
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dollars in 2006, similar to the incomes gained in the
year
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2003.
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