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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams detail the changes in the layout of the Central Libray that have been made for the
last
 20 years.
Overall
, it is evident that the library has undergone drastic renovations in its structure.
While
 the number of rooms remained unchanged at four, the purpose of each
room
 has been altered. Regarding the storage of
books
, the classification system was updated compared to 20 years ago:
while
 there were three categories of children's,
adult
fiction
 and
adult
-non-
fiction
books
 in the past,
books
 are now classified into children's
fiction
,
adult
fiction
 and all reference
books
.
In addition
,
adult
fiction
books
 are now displayed on the right side of the corridor, fronting the information desk. The area where
adult
fiction
books
 used to be is now taken by reference
books
.
Finally
, the
room
 of children's
books
 was replaced by the lecture
room
, and the
books
 are now placed in the
room
 at the left-upper corner, where storytelling events take place. Several new facilities have been constructed in the public library as well.
While
 the tables and chairs at the centre of the corridor were removed, self-service machines were newly implemented right behind the information desk. Next to the machines, a cafe was built on the right side of the entrance, where the enquiry desks were located
initially
. On the left of the entrance, the reading
room
 is now replaced by a new computer
room
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books, adult, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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