In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

There are many couples in the world today who have decided not to have children. Some explain
this
by saying that they simply do not like kids and do not know how they should be treated, so in order not to complicate the
life
of themselves and the child, they decide not to have heirs. Others say that they do not have opportunities to bring up a juvenile and have a quality
life
. In
this
essay, we will discuss the good aspects and drawbacks of
this
trend. Let's start with the fact that nowadays many people still consider childbirth to be one of the most important responsibilities of a person. In fact, even the state is interested in a high birth rate of children, so it is ready to pay parents allowances for childbirth.
For example
, China has the best demography in the world and
as a
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is now one of the leading countries in the world.
Also
, some couples thought that with the arrival of a baby in the family their close relationship with each other will be lost, but as a recent study has shown young parents become even closer with the arrival of a new family member, which strengthens their family. In
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I have proved that
Childfreys
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children
have valid disadvantages.
However
, the advantage of a family lies mainly in its independence from someone else.
For example
, when you have an offspring you have to limit yourself to hanging out with friends, travelling and just other pleasures of
life
while
waiting for the baby to grow up.
In addition
, you should not forget about the numerous expenses that will increase every year.
Also
, kids are often capricious and can be difficult to control, which is absolutely normal for them
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because they are just learning to regulate their emotions, but not all people want to spend their nerves on
this
.
Such
tendencies make people give up on having
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heir. To summarise the above, I will draw the following conclusion. Childfree is a conscious choice that has valid arguments and reasons. We should respect everyone's opinion even if it differs from what has been imposed by society since ancient times. We should live in the present and understand the essence of
this
phenomenon.
Then
life
will be more pleasant.
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