You will take a short holiday in London next month and would like to spend some time with a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Tell him when you will be in London and why • Ask him for recommendations of what to do there • Suggest some things you can do together You should write at least 150 words You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Hi Frank, Hope you’re doing well in

London

! I’m excited to tell you that I’ve planned a short vacation in your city next month and would like to meet you there. Actually, I’ve got a full week of holiday break from my office and I’m going to spend

this

time in

London

. My flight will land on December 24th at 7pm in your city, just before Christmas Day. I came to know about the

London

New Year event

that is

quite famous and I’m coming to join the event! Well, I have a couple of free days between Christmas and a New Year event. So, would you suggest me any other places to visit during

this

spare time? As you might know my interest in heritage buildings, could you find some similar locations to explore?

Lastly

, I was wondering if you’re

also

free that week. If so, we can not only go to nightclubs but

also

see spectacular views of

London

Lake. How does my holiday plan sound to you? Warm wishes, Harpal

Submitted by harpal.singh on Fri Nov 03 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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for example
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therefore
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although
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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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