The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003
The line graph depicts the numbers spent on clothes on the Internet in the USA and
Japan
from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
, it is noticeable that both countries spent money on the Internet equally. Therefore
, Japan
and the USA showed upward trends throughout the period.
To begin
with Japan
, it accounted for 10 million and rose progressively to approximately 12 between 2000 and 2001. However
, it dropped marginally to under 5 millions
in 2002 before going up to over 15 Change to singular
million
in
the end of 2002. Change the preposition
at
Consequently
, money spent in Japan
increased dramatically to 20 in the final years.
With regards to the USA, it obtained roughly 5 million and in 2000 it went up to 10 which is after a fall to 8 in 2001Ultimately, in 2002 it showed a significant increase to 20 million in 2003 and stayed constant in the final years .Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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