The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.
The chart below depicts the
number
of annual tourists to three museums during the period of 6 years starting from 2000. The unit is denoted by millions. As can be seen from the graph, the National Museum of China saw an upward trend in visitors
while
the other two museums observed a variation over the years.
However
, the
number
of people who visited the place in Edo-Tokyo remained at the same highest figure
in
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two consecutive years 2000 and 2001. In terms of visitors to MET in New York, the
number
of tourists started from 12 in 2000
then
dropped to approximately 6 in both 2001 and 2002 before it rose gradually until it reached a peak at more than 14 in 2005.
In addition
, the figure for Edo-Tokyo visitors reached the highest point of just over 13 in 2000 and 2001 before it declined noticeably to the lowest point of more than 6 in 2003
then
witnessed a slight increase until 2005.
On the other hand
,
it is clear that
there was a considerable growth in visitations to the National Museum in China from 6 in 2000 to just over 11 in 2003 when it remained the same
number
for 2004
then
it grew dramatically to nearly 16 in 2005.
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