The bar chart shows the results of the survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London thought of the city
This
chart illustrates the percentage of interesting things about London
by its people's thoughts. It is divided into 6 sectors, which are the range of shops, job opportunities, the mixture of community, museum and art galleries, nightlife
, and transport from a 3-year survey
. Overall
, most society thought that the range of shops was the most attractive thing in London
.
In the first-year survey
, it shows that the less interesting scope from London
is museums and galleries which got 22%. Next, the second-year survey
shows nightlife
and transport as the most uninteresting sectors in London
which were chosen by 20% of people. Last
, the third-year survey
, depicted the lowest value was nightlife
which got only 22%.
If it's looked from the average value the first place of the interesting factor was taken by the range of shops, which was followed by job opportunities, a mixture of people, museums & art galleries, and the last
place is nightlife
and transport which their average value is 23%.Submitted by rlsatria on
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