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The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the numbers of four forms of collected
waste
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 by a specific recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, gathered trash in all categories climbed marginally except for paper, which experienced a considerable increase.
Also
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, garden trash collected less than others,
whereas
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 paper had the highest amount of
waste
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 collection. In 2011, paper, which was the most collected
waste
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 at 57
tones
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, witnessed a steady reduction by 17
tones
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 in 2013 before jumping and reaching a peak of 70
tones
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 in the
last
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 year, followed by glass quantity, which fluctuated between 48 and 41 tonnes in the first four years;
finally
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, it rose to 52
tones
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 in 2013.
On the other hand
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, the lowest collected
waste
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 was for tins and plastics, which accounted for 35 and 32
tones
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 in 2011; since
then
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, the figure for tins and plastics decreased by 8 and 17
tones
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 in 2011 before growing to 34 and 31
tones
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 in the next year, again after falling to 33 and 27
tones
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, they saw a negligible rise of 6 and 7
tones
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 in 2013.
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