Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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advent of technology and a plethora of information available on the internet have made people self-reliant. Most

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individuals

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are becoming dependent on these technological advancements for solving their

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health

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instead

of paying a visit to their concerned physician. I opine that it is a negative growth and increasing

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of drug toxicity and antibiotic resistance, will prove

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with, the majority of the populace

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upon search engines like

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to be their free doctor. Not being a medical professional only allows them to know some symptoms of the condition rather than the complete

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diagnosis

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, they take medicines for the same,

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a result, the

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of drug toxicity are on

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rise.

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individuals

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who treat themselves without consulting any general practitioner

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from organ

faliures

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failures

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mainly kidney and liver.

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, every medication prescribed by the physician has to be followed for a specific time period

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before stopping it.

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of spreading awareness

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numerous campaigns amongst

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individuals

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, they still rely on saving the check-up fees and self-medicating

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.

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, the

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of antibiotic resistance are on the

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high, making simple and easily treatable diseases like cold and flu hard to manage.

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, these people have to be hospitalised for the same. To illustrate, more than 50 per cent of the general wards are filled with non-responding to medications

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the illegitimate abuse of pharmaceutical products.

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, more and more

individuals

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are going to self-treat themselves, which will increase their problems in the coming times rather than

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. It's the person's responsibility to be aware of the

consquences

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consequences

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action and ought to consult their physician for any illness they suffer from.