The bar charts below give information on the road transport in a number of European countries.
The diagram illustrates information on
the
road transportation in a few European countries.
Regarding the Correct article usage
apply
first
bar chart
, Denmark has the first
place
at just above 12000 kilometers
per Change the spelling
kilometres
year
and it is closely followed by France. On the other hands
, Germany and Spain have almost Fix the agreement mistake
hand
same
number of Correct article usage
the same
km
per year
and they are in the last
position. At
the end, Italy and United hold the middle Change the preposition
In
place
in the ranking. Also
, the average value is about 10000.
In regard the
second Change preposition
to the
chart
which is about travel per person for
bus, train, metro and bike, Denmark is in Change preposition
by
the
Correct article usage
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first
place
by far from the other countries. Unlike Denmark, United
Kingdom and France hold the Correct article usage
the United
last
place
. At
the end, the average value is just over 1000 per unit.
Change the preposition
In
Overall
, number
of Correct article usage
the number
km
per year
in the second chart
is much less than the first
one and the highest in the second chart
it
was 3000 Correct pronoun usage
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km
per year
although
the highest was more than 12000 km
per year
for the first
hart
.Correct your spelling
chart
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