Because of the rising cost of living, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30's. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to
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the rapid development of the society and economy, the
cost
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of living is increasing. Many teenagers cannot afford the
cost
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of living if they live independently.
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,
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proportion
f
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them decided to live with their
parents
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so that
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to prevent extra
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cost
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costs
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. Some of them might already
above
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be above
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age
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the age
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of 30 and some may even
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married. The advantages and disadvantages of
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this
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these
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issues are discussed below.
Firstly
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, living with
parents
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can reduce
expense
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expenses
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so that to appreciate
oursevles
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ourselves
. When living with
parents
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, young
people
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do not have to spend extra living
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cost
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costs
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for another living place, including the rent, electricity
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, etc. That
save
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a lot of
money
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which can
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use
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it
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apply
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for another meaningful
cost
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.
For example
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, young
people
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can spend
this
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money
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to join some professional courses to learn a new thing, or even they may
use
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the
money
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to have a gorgeous dinner
together with
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their
parents
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. If young
people
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are
got
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married or even have
children
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, a huge expense is needed to take care of the
children
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. When young
people
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feel annoyed at that environment, they can
use
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the
money
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to travel or have a staycation to relax
themselves
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and separate from
the
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their
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parents
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for
awhile
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a while
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.
Therefore
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, living with
parents
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can save
money
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and
people
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can
use
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it to higher their living
standard
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standards
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in
another aspects
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. Another advantage
due to
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this
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issue is
parents
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gives
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support easily if they are living together.
Parents
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gave
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lived with their
children
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for at least 18 years.
Parents
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know about you,
for
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example
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your eating
habit
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habits
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,
emotion
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emotions
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, etc. If young
people
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live with their
parents
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,
parents
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can take care of them and handle those little things in their lives.
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, they want to have a lunch box
durng
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during
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work time, it is time-consuming if they have to make it themselves, but when they live with
parents
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,
parents
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can prepare it for them
according to
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their eating habits.
Moreover
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, if the young
people
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got
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married and have
children
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,
parents
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can
also
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help to take care of the kids, so they do not have to spend
extra
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the extra
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expense
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expenses
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to employ
a
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unknown worker to
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charge.
Therefore
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, living with
parents
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may always give young
people
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a helping hand.
However
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, if the relationship between young
people
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and their
parents
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is not good, it may turn
this
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issue
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a negative side. A lot of young
people
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desire to live independently after they become an adult. Why? Because
as
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of
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parents
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parents'
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perspective, they love you so they control you.
People
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want to escape from them to lose their control.
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, if those
people
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are forced to live with their
parents
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, they may always argue and cause a
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environment at home, which is unhealthy
to
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for
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all the family
member
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members
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.
To conclude
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, the advantages of living with
parents
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seems
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seem
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outweigh
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the
disadvantsge
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disadvantage
disadvantages
. If the young
people
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and their
parents
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can put themselves into each other shoes, even
they
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if they
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are living in the same place, they can accept and pay respect to each other. Saving more
money
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to travel and have fun with each other to build a better relationship and wonderful
memory
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memories
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.
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