Due to
the rapid development of the society and economy, the
cost
of living is increasing. Many teenagers cannot afford the
cost
of living if they live independently.
Therefore
,
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proportion
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them decided to live with their
parents
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to prevent extra
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. Some of them might already
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ageAdd an article
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of 30 and some may even
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married. The advantages and disadvantages of
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issues are discussed below.
Firstly
, living with
parents
can reduce
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so that to appreciate
. When living with
parents
, young
people
do not have to spend extra living
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for another living place, including the rent, electricity
cost
, etc. That
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a lot of
money
which can
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it Correct pronoun usage
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for another meaningful
cost
.
For example
, young
people
can spend
this
money
to join some professional courses to learn a new thing, or even they may
use
the
money
to have a gorgeous dinner
together with
their
parents
. If young
people
are
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married or even have
children
, a huge expense is needed to take care of the
children
. When young
people
feel annoyed at that environment, they can
use
the
money
to travel or have a staycation to relax
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and separate from
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parents
for
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.
Therefore
, living with
parents
can save
money
and
people
can
use
it to higher their living
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in
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.
Another advantage
due to
this
issue is
parents
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support easily if they are living together.
Parents
gave Verb problem
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lived with their
children
for at least 18 years.
Parents
know about you,
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your eating
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,
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, etc. If young
people
live with their
parents
,
parents
can take care of them and handle those little things in their lives.
For example
, they want to have a lunch box
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work time, it is time-consuming if they have to make it themselves, but when they live with
parents
,
parents
can prepare it for them
according to
their eating habits.
Moreover
, if the young
people
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married and have
children
,
parents
can
also
help to take care of the kids, so they do not have to spend
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expenseFix the agreement mistake
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to employ
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unknown worker to
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charge.
Therefore
, living with
parents
may always give young
people
a helping hand.
However
, if the relationship between young
people
and their
parents
is not good, it may turn
this
issue
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a negative side. A lot of young
people
desire to live independently after they become an adult. Why? Because
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perspective, they love you so they control you.
People
want to escape from them to lose their control.
Therefore
, if those
people
are forced to live with their
parents
, they may always argue and cause a
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environment at home, which is unhealthy
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all the family
memberFix the agreement mistake
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.
To conclude
, the advantages of living with
parents
seemsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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outweighAdd the particle
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the
disadvantsgeCorrect your spelling
disadvantage
disadvantages
. If the young
people
and their
parents
can put themselves into each other shoes, even
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are living in the same place, they can accept and pay respect to each other. Saving more
money
to travel and have fun with each other to build a better relationship and wonderful
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.