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Today,many people do not know their neighbours in large cities.What problems does this cause?what can be done about this?

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In many large
cities
,a lot of
people
 more and more do not communicate with their
neighbours
.
This
 problem har originally they were extremely busy and did not have time to connect with
people
 in their area.One of the measures to solve
this
 situation is authorities should organise more activities to encourage
people
 to participate together in large
cities
. The principal cause of
this
 is that the youth today is always busy with work.They almost spend all their time in the office or on social networks and meet their
neighbours
.
For example
,many families who live in large
cities
 have not known any information about areas since they moved to.
This
 problem nowadays makes
people
 have fewer friends and communication ability has decreased compared with before.Do not like a village,
cities
 are always noisy and the pressure about money,family and other social friendship are more and more make
people
 becoming afraid and worried when they meet
neighbours
,especially in block tower,the owner often
close
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 the door the whole day
although
 they still stay in. One of the main measures to solve
this
 solution is that authorities and managers in these areas should organise more events and activities on special occasions.
This
 way has a negative effect on citizens.They will feel comfortable when they join some occasions
such
 as Halloween and Christmas together
also
 makes children and adults talk more and have a good relationship with
neighbours
.
For example
,in Europe
people
 often tend to live in their own houses and do not know about their
neighbours
. In conclusion,having a good relationship with
neighbours
 not only help us make
a
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new friend but
also
 make
people
 get closer to each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Community spirit
  • Isolation
  • Surveillance
  • Safety and security
  • Vulnerability
  • Support networks
  • Local gatherings
  • Foster
  • Social media platforms
  • Neighbourhood watch
  • Emergency situations
  • Natural disasters
  • Shared resources
  • Crime rates
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