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The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the chart gives information about four
type
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types
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 of grain
production
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 between 2010 and 2030. in general, all grain
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has increase
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increase
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increased
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 over the past 20 years . Wheat
production
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 increased from 100
million
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 metric
tons
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 in 2010 and reach 110
million
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 metric
tons
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 in 2030. Barley
double
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doubled
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 its
production
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 from 50
million
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 metric
tons
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 to 100
million
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 metric
tons
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 in 2030. meanwhile, Maize and Rice
productions
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production
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 rose slightly. Rice
production
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increase
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increases
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2.2
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by 2.2
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million
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 metric
tons
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 and maize
production
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increase
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increased
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1
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by 1
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million
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 metric
tons
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 during the
periods
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period
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Linking words: Add linking words.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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