The chart below describes the production of wheat by 5 countries in 2012 and 2020. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
the chart gives information about four
type
of grain Change to a plural noun
types
production
between 2010 and 2030. in general, all grain Add a missing verb
has increase
increase
over the past 20 years . Wheat Replace the word
increased
production
increased from 100 million
metric tons
in 2010 and reach 110 million
metric tons
in 2030. Barley double
its Wrong verb form
doubled
production
from 50 million
metric tons
to 100 million
metric tons
in 2030. meanwhile, Maize and Rice productions
rose slightly. Rice Fix the agreement mistake
production
production
increase
Change the verb form
increases
2.2
Change preposition
by 2.2
million
metric tons
and maize production
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
1
Change preposition
by 1
million
metric tons
during the periods
.Fix the agreement mistake
period
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