The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates how many people went to the Ashdown Museum in the years before and after its renovation. The charts give information about the results of
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research in which visitors in those two years were asked how pleased they were with their experience.
Overall
, it can be seen that after the improvement more individuals went to see the Museum.
In addition
, those men and women were far more satisfied with their visit than those in the year before the remodelling. 74,000 people paid a visit to the Ashdown Museum in the year before the modernization. Half of them were not happy with their experience, as 40% were dissatisfied and 10% were very dissatisfied. 45% of the visitors in general were pleased with a proportion of 30% to 15% satisfied and very satisfied, respectively. The number of viewers increased dramatically in the year after refurbishment, reaching 92,000 and so did the pleasure from the visit with 75% of the visitors less or more satisfied.
In contrast
, there was a decrease in the proportion of unhappy people, dropping to 20% in total.
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