The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1998 and 2000.
The graphs illustrate the total cost and the nations that imported
fish
to the US from 1988 to 2000.
Overall
, while
the proportion of source of fish
imported to US
from Canada witnessed a downward trend during the Correct article usage
the US
period
, the opposite was true for that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
China and Change preposition
apply
others country
. Fix the agreement mistake
other countries
In addition
, the figure for others country
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other countries
account
for the biggest share Change the verb form
accounts
at the end
of the period
.
According to
the table charts, the total bill of fish
increased significantly from 6.57 billions
in 1988 to 8.52 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 1992, after which it Change to singular
billion
growed
sharply to 10.72 Correct your spelling
grew
billions
in 2000. Change to singular
billion
In contrast
, the ratio of exporting fish
resource
in Canada with a rapid decrease from 60% in 1998 to 34% in 1992 and a final drop to 28% Fix the agreement mistake
resources
at the end
of the period
.
The number of exporting
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exported
fish
resource
in China Fix the agreement mistake
resources
starting
at 13% at the beginning of the Wrong verb form
started
period
,with a subsequent increase to 20% in 1992 and a slight increase to 30% in 2000. The similarity was seen for the figure of that in others country
, accounting for 27% in 1988 before reaching Fix the agreement mistake
other countries
the
peak at 46% in 1992 and ending the Correct article usage
a
period
with a marginal decline to 42% in 2000.Submitted by mythongminhhonmanh on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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