You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing
this
letter to express my frustration about my neighbour who makes a lot of noise and disturbs us while
working, sleeping or doing something important. Let me explain, my neighbour in flat 40 is very annoying. They organise parties with their relatives with speakers at high volumes in the day as well as
at night and speak loudly. Moreover
, they do not follow society's rules and throw rubbish here and there instead
of putting it in the garbage bin.
We have been experiencing this
problem for the last
month and I also
tried to make them understand and maintain peace in society but they do not listen and talk rudely. I do work from home and can't focus on my work, even my children also
find it very challenging to pay attention to their studies. In addition
, at weekends we are unable to sleep properly which affects our mental and physical health.
I request you to take strict action against them or give them a warning to avoid this
kind of behaviour because it's not only me but the whole society who is affected by this
problem.
I thank you in anticipation and look forward to a positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
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task response
Provide more specific examples of how the noise has had a negative impact on your daily life.
coherence cohesion
Use transition words and phrases to better connect your ideas and improve overall coherence.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express your frustrations and suggestions more effectively.
grammatical range
Utilize a wider variety of complex sentence structures to showcase a higher level of grammatical range.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite