The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
The illustration displays the procedure for recycling
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it's a circular process consisting of 3 main stages: Collecting & Linking Words
sorting
, compressing & Correct word choice
and sorting
cleaning
, & Correct word choice
and cleaning
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finally
the finishing of Correct word choice
and finally
products
to be used.
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the products
To begin
with, Civillians throw out used Linking Words
plastic
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bottles
into the recycling bin. The Use synonyms
plastic
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bottles
inside the can Use synonyms
is
taken by a particular truck, to deliver Change the verb form
are
it
to the recycling Correct pronoun usage
apply
center
. There, an employee sorts out the Change the spelling
centre
plastic
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bottles
that can or cannot be used Use synonyms
further
. Linking Words
Next,
The Linking Words
bottles
in good condition are compressed into blocks & Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
crushed with the help of factory machinery. Correct word choice
and then
Moreover
, the mashed pieces Linking Words
is
rinsed inside a tank.
Change the verb form
are
In addition
, The small Linking Words
plastic
pieces are Use synonyms
then
converted into Linking Words
plastic
pellets using an appliance, during which the Use synonyms
plastic
pellets are heated to form raw material. Use synonyms
Thus
, the raw material is compiled & Linking Words
made
into different end products ranging from clothes and Correct word choice
and made
bottles
to containers & Use synonyms
pencils
. These are Correct word choice
and pencils
also
recyclable and the process begins again.Linking Words
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