The maps shows the changes of Pentland from 1980 to 2007

The maps shows the changes of Pentland from 1980 to 2007
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The diagram depicts the alternations that were done in
Pentland
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in 1980 and in 2007.
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, it is readily apparent that there were significant renovations in the land of
Pentland
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. It was converted to less industrial and more residential with the construction of houses, stores, a marina for yachts, and entertainment facilities. In 1980,
Pentland
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consisted mainly of grasslands. To the south, there are two intersecting roads, going towards the eastern car
park
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and an industrial area in the west and the sea to the north. By 2007, every area changed. An additional road was constructed around the sea which is now the yacht marina, Beside the new road, apartments and a
park
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were built. To the south of the
park
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, a swimming pool and a
multi-story
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car
park
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were established, opposite to that, a cinema was set up in the southwestern part of
Pentland
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, and at the Southeastern, Multiple houses were built.
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, around the intersecting roads, many stores were put up.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pentland, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • urban expansion
  • natural landscape
  • recreational facilities
  • commercial
  • industrial
  • economic growth
  • environmental initiatives
  • waste management
  • public amenities
  • community centers
  • living standards
  • pollution
  • traffic congestion
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