The maps shows the changes of Pentland from 1980 to 2007
The diagram depicts the alternations that were done in
Pentland
in 1980 and in 2007.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that there were significant renovations in the land of Pentland
. It was converted to less industrial and more residential with the construction of houses, stores, a marina for yachts, and entertainment facilities.
In 1980, Pentland
consisted mainly of grasslands. To the south, there are two intersecting roads, going towards the eastern car park
and an industrial area in the west and the sea to the north.
By 2007, every area changed. An additional road was constructed around the sea which is now the yacht marina, Beside the new road, apartments and a park
were built. To the south of the park
, a swimming pool and a multi-story
car Correct your spelling
multi-storey
park
were established, opposite to that, a cinema was set up in the southwestern part of Pentland
, and at the Southeastern, Multiple houses were built. Furthermore
, around the intersecting roads, many stores were put up.Submitted by amnahazfar03 on
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