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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The majority of
people
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 believe that the retirement
age
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 for some individuals who live much longer should be extended. I disagree with the statement that older
people
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 who live longer than others must work in old
age
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. On the one hand,
people
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 aged over 60 can not work very well because their brains and
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 are worn out and at
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age
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, many of them have health problems
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 as Alzheimer's.
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, working in any job have some requirement
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 as mental readiness and a strong physical body
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 older
people
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 can not do activities or think well.
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, my grandfather is 65 years old and has medical issues, he can not walk more than 15 minutes because their knees feel in pain my grandfather has retired but at a younger
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, he was a strong man and worked for different companies but now he deserves to stay at home and relax.
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, older
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 gain valuable expertise during their lives for that reason we can ask for help to learn their knowledge and experience to do our obligation very well. I believe that extending retirement for
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 is unhelpful.
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, in my university, many of the teachers were over 60 years old so they could not express the content well so I had to learn courses on my own.
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, I think older
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 deserve to relax and rest in old
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 and an important task is that they can teach their experience to other
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.
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