The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
the three pie charts illustrate the expenditure and the usage of five categories of resources and provide the information about distribution of
world
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the world
population
. Overall
, the largest resource consumpsion
occurs in the USA & Europe, the most significant Correct your spelling
consumption
population
resides in Asia, and global expenditure comes to 'others'
category.
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the 'others'
To begin
, at the
first Correct article usage
apply
glance
it is clear enough to know the most significant part of the Add a comma
glance,
world
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world's
population
live in Asia 57%, followed by Europe and America that
have Correct pronoun usage
which
similar
value which is 14% respectively, Add an article
a similar
whereas
slightly larger than Africa 10%. Although
,
the majority of Remove the comma
apply
population
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the population
live
in Asia, Correct subject-verb agreement
lives
however
the Add the comma(s)
however,
consumpsion
of resources Correct your spelling
consumption
was
made up the highest part of the USA and Europe.
Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
the first chart, Correct article usage
the others
others
category Correct quantifier usage
other
was
contributed the most to the Unnecessary verb
apply
world
outlay, followed by transport, food, and housing accounted for 24%, 18%, and 12% respectively. In comparison, people Change noun form
world's
was
spent less of their money Unnecessary verb
apply
in
clothing which means Change preposition
on
'cloth'
category was the smallest segment Correct article usage
the 'cloth'
in
Change preposition
of
world
spending.Submitted by fatimanastitiniskala on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population with synonyms.
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