the diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

the diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
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The diagram illustrates the steps of
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production from
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cane
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.
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, there are 7 steps in the
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of making
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, starting from growing
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cane
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and ending with drying and cooling of the
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. In the first step of making
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, the
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cane
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needs to grow for approximately 12-18 months. Once it has matured, farmers harvest it either manually using a sickle or mechanically with the help of a tractor.
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to extract the
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, the
sugar
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cane
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undergoes a crushing
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, involving a mill that presses it until the
juice
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is obtained.
This
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process
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involves a machine to press it until the
juice
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comes out. In the following step, the collected
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is poured into a filter made from limestone to purify it. After the
juice
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is filtered, it undergoes the evaporation
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to produce syrup using an evaporator with constant heat applied at the bottom.
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, it enters the centrifuge
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, which separates out
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crystals produced from the syrup. The
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ends when the crystals are dried and cooled. These dry dried crystals are what we call
sugar
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.
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