The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The pie charts compare the
population
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of Yemen and Italy in relation to their ageing in the year 2020 and the future prediction for 2050.
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, it is expected that
people
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aged 15-59
years
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will increase in Yemen,
while
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this
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amount
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Italians will fall considerably. it is
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noticeable that Italy experienced a bigger proportion of elderly
people
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(aged 60 or over) in comparison with an inconsiderable number of them in Yaman. By 2000, almost half
people
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in Yaman were under 14
years
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old,
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this
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amount for children in Italy was around 14
percent
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per cent
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of the whole society.
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pattern for both countries is predicted to drop by about 37 and 11 per
cent
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of the
population
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in 2050 respectively. Looking into the future, Italian senior citizens
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expected to increase by 20 per
cent
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and the
population
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of
people
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aged under 60
years
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old will fall in 2050. In Yeman it is predicted that the middle-aged
population
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rise to just under 60 per
cent
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. The same increasing pattern may
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be seen in the percentage of elderly
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with nearly 6 per
cent
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while
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there will be a drop of about 10 per
cent
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in the
population
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under 14
years
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old.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, people, years, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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