The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million

The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million
The table displays information about
underground
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the underground
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railway
system
in
London
,
Paris
, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles
such
as opening data, length of route, and
passengers
a year.
Overall
,
London
,
Paris
, and Tokyo have the most used underground
railway
systems by
passengers
compared to their counterparts.
London
has the oldest and the longest underground
railway
system
by far. In 1863, the longest underground
railway
system
opened in
London
with 394 kilometers and
this
transportation
using
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was used
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by almost 800
million
passengers
per year. The population of
railway
users is nearly 1200
million
individuals in
Paris
, the
railway
system
in
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there set in 1900 and
approximately
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is approximately
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200
kilometers
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kilometres
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now. The underground in Tokyo opened later than
Paris
' and
London
's;
nevertheless
,
its
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it was
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used by 1927
million
passengers
per year. The
railway
system
in Washington DC
established
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was established
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in 1976
which
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it
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is 126
kilometers
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kilometres
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lenght
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long
and it is used by roughly 150
million
people. Kyoto's and Los Angeles' railways
set
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are
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relatively new and they
used
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are used
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by 45 and 50
million
passengers
respectively. Kyoto's underground
system
is the shortest compared to other cities.
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