The diagram below shows the floor plan of the public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The diagram demonstrates both the recent layout of the floor at the central library and illustrates how it used to be 20 years ago. It's clear that the whole plan of the floor was changed during

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20-year period, and every section

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in another part.

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, the tables and chairs have already disappeared.

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the pictures, a cafe and self-service machines are added to the right side near the entrance where it used to be the inquiry desk.

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, an information desk is replaced next to the machines.

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, the adult fiction books section has been moved to the opposite side and it has become smaller by now.

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, all reference records are placed at the previous site of fiction books.

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all that mentioned, the children's book part has been rearranged and it is a lecture room now.

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, a wider spot is provided for children to participate in storytelling events equipped with convenient sofas and read fiction books which is in the other side is used to be a room for computer games.

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, the computer room is located on the left hand after entering the library through the entrance.

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